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Book 3 Ch 51: A Damned Shame

🕑 Added 2024-12-26 13:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Kitty Lee

Damn Vampa 🍿 Really cool seeing all the perspectives. Hope Zak is ok 🥺 TFTC

William Spiva

Just caught up and read your whole series up to this point. You’re a phenomenal writer! I’ll stay subscribed so long as you keep posting. Thanks for the story. Great pacing. Fun magic system. 10/10.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! So having now reread these last 2 chapter keeping in mind that Dantes was much more impacted by the destroyed Gardens than I thought the situation especially of Zak, Felix and the civillians they are protecting is suddenly much much more grim than expected! It IS very interesting to get that background lore about Vampa though! He is perhaps the most Badass "Side Character" apart from Syn maybe so far... millenia Old Elven Knight who saw literally several Kingdoms and many noble houses fall even being the one to end at least one of them himself? Holy shit!

Gopard

Yeah I read it as "he can't do it basically every 30 seconds as he did before because it hurts" not "he can't reach the majority of important groups in the city". There am edit would definitely help (with this knowledge the chapter 50 also reads completely differently xD).

Shelbo

Damn I liked Tren, at least he went down fighting

Seersucker

I mean, right after that it says 'the pain made it harder'. It's meant to imply that he can't reach as far as easily and he's trying to focus on the front. I'll put in an edit to clarify.

Anthony Diaz

Thank you for the amazing chapter

Gopard

So just started reading this chappy and was wondering didn't you quite literally write in chapter 49 after the burning of his gardens just happened quote "this was why he made all those gardens underground [...] He could STILL CHECK IN ON ALL OF HIS PEOPLE HE HAD CHECKED IN BEFORE...".


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