Wishing Stone - Chapter 3
🕑 Added 2022-10-23 07:01:21 +0000 UTCPDF attached
The third chapter in a new 4 chapter story by curious4ever.
Little James finds a wishing stone and wishes for a puppy. His wish is granted, though different from how he expected it.
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JG
James was cute at the beginning of the story but now he is even cuter as Cookie. And she seems to be responding well to her new environment. I love the constant reinforcement of good behavior with the treats. I think in the beginning they were candy treats but they must be doggy ones by now. And she is oblivious to the fact that she is being treated more and more like a doggy. She is still holding out hope of getting turned back. I'm not very optimistic that this will happen. Can't wait for the next part.
Maxwell Stevenson
Another wonderful chapter! Poor Cookie is losing more and more of her old self, but she doesn't seem to care too much about it, right? I really like the mental changes in this one; being unable to read should be a huge red flag for her, but hey... those are nice people right? They're going to help her transforming back... but transforming back into one? Also transforming is such a difficult word... What does that mean? Oh well... i bet that Cookie now cares more about being a good girl than about big difficult words. Even because it feels so nice to be petted and to have treats, eheheh