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Alpha Test (Part 1)
🕑 Added 2016-12-06 04:19:41 +0000 UTC First story of last month (sorry for the delay). This is actually what I'd worked on for the better part of November. I was hoping to publish this story in a small anthology with a few other feral authors, but the story was rejected. I think I know why - this first part may be pretty good, but the second part got rushed due to the word limit I was forced to abide by. I'm going to review and revise part 2 (and possibly part 1) until it is up to my standards, but for now enjoy part 1, which I am very proud of.Kind of a bummer, though! Feel free to give it a read and give feedback and suggestions - I need them!
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