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Chapter 118: Lines that won't be crossed.

🕑 Added 2023-03-24 23:16:04 +0000 UTC

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Just remember the kid is 16-17

JOHNNYBOY 117

All I have to say is Shigure has terrible judgement when it comes to people. He already lost someone because he trusted his people too much and now he's doing it again with that guy eyeing the girls following drake. You just know he's gonna take it further than just kidnapping.

You are way too observant lmao. Literally only said pale skin and thin arms. I will not say yes or no, for the sake of not spoiling lol

James Faulkner

Did we get any indicator of what race the creepy kidnap dude is? Maybe some sort of vamp?

Rad

Is this more race issue foreshadowing?! Oh my, I have no idea where this will go!

I do suppose Bjorn's side of things could be elaborated on a bit more so I can see where you are coming from for sure

ItWasIDIO!!

But it's cool I just usually comment just to comment if I'm in the mood as long as it's readable & fun I'm here hasn't broke my immersion

ItWasIDIO!!

Like bear being a threat seems rushed with nothing really helping sell it besides a mention of dreams & then the fight complicating things by yelling it out for others to hear pushing shigure for a fight was OK(& him being his usual abrasive self) but it just seems to escalate faster than we're given time for a pick a side(& maybe give shigure a better reasons so maybe we take his side)

Can you elaborate on that more? I thought i was doing a good job of explaining each of their motivations for feeling the way they did but i guess not?

James Faulkner

Man, Shigure definitely just lost control of his camp and heads are gonna roll when they try to kidnap people Drake cares about

ItWasIDIO!!

Yes yes he does & idk this whole meet up segment feels like a rush of events that either hold no emotion or are trying to be some forced emotions


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