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A Cold Welcome Part 1

🕑 Added 2023-10-10 10:06:32 +0000 UTC

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Jcaxlive

The character depth and story depiction in this first chapter alone is amazing! Being able to tell that Corrin was bothered by what had occurred was easy to see in her mannerisms even without knowing anything about the character as of this point. Also all the detail with Corrin's assets returning to their normal size once her armor is taken off was real good! The interaction between Corrin and Kaguya was soo good! You can instantly tell how loving of a mother Kaguya is while trying to help Corrin through her troubles. The part with Kaguya getting upset about Corrin wanting to use that spell to then Corrin breaking down into tears was written so well, you can really tell how much Kaguya is against her daughter using it. Such fantastic writing, especially for just the first chapter.

Chimera134

Sweet! And you also have the Ai pic at the top of pootreon to give a good ref. Just missing the Black Sclera.

Jcaxlive

This one was a very nice introduction to this story! I love that I can imagine somewhat of how corrin looks!


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