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Chapter 167 - The Fruits

🕑 Added 2025-03-28 18:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Quendolayne

Hmmm, while I really like your story… this saved by an dungeon after ‘forced’ to fuck up is a lil bit too deus ex machina. I guess there should have been better ways to bring up this story line even if you wanted to clear the board … again. I mean it’s remind me a lot of the contrived way she had to break up with her girl friend and change the country. It seems the breaks between the arcs are too forced. Don’t misunderstand me the new arcs are always interesting but the transition to them is rough and forced.

Kermit

Pretty Boy stabbed her and blew himself up just before the oasis blew up.

Dec

Looks like I missed something. Who exactly betrayed her?


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