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One step closer to my work PC!

🕑 Added 2023-03-01 01:22:08 +0000 UTC
One step closer to my work PC!

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Dacer

Glad you're doing well CC. I've done long-distance relationship things before, and yup, it's difficult on both people. The best advice I got during that time was, "Long-distance can be done, but it helps a lot if both people have an `end-date' in mind when they'll be able to be in the same place together again." It helps when you both know in advance that the long-distance will end on day x, basically. As for adding a recap before each new chapter of The Swordbearer, I dunno. Because I like your storytelling and your characters, the main details of The Swordbearer stick in my memory pretty easily. I sometimes temporarily forget the names of certain minor characters, but once I start reading again, it's all good. Plus, will it seem strange to have updates heading every chapter once the game is complete, and new buyers will be reading it through as a continuous tale? I don't know the answer, I'm just putting it out there for consideration. I suppose you could do the recaps by having a a minor character appear on screen and talk to the viewer? Kind of like an emcee or narrator? Problem there might be that having a narrator character talk to the reader could break the immersion and/or suspension of disbelief a fantasy tale definitely benefits from ... You've done so well with the characters and story in The Swordbearer to this point, I guess all that I can say is "trust your instincts", because they've proven true so far! Travel safe, be well! Tell Samira I miss her. :-D


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