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143. Chromaticism

🕑 Added 2025-07-09 03:33:54 +0000 UTC

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Zachary Simmons

Glad to heard you enjoyed that haha. Eryndor is a real one fr. Love to see the analysis here. I'm hoping as the lore and world get more revealed going forward you guys will have more stuff like this to chew on. There's a lot going on with different groups and people, but this is the first time I think we're getting a real taste of that. As for how it will pan out... we'll have to wait and see!

Zachary Simmons

Glad you enjoyed! It *was* a bit shorter than I would've liked, but I think it's a bit of both haha. Originally the transitions between this chapter and the others before were different, but some things got shuffled around so it might be a bit more abrupt than I'd intended.

LOLZMAN

Finally, someone in a fictional setting takes the forewarning with the respect it is due. I have to say I hate the cliché of the seniors not listening to the younger MC's warnings before it's too late. So its feels me with no end of happeness to see our man Ery sit down listen and believe them. Granted, I believe it's likely that 1. Ery was already suspicious of what was happening and 2. that he is likely part of the "good guys" Faction that would oppose the evildoers we have seen so far. It would make sense that the great sprites would get help from good-natured poeple to act on their behalf, as they seem to be relatively confined to their areas. An example would be, of course, the stillblade, who is clearly a part of this faction. Really, everything we hear about Ery makes him seem like the sprite knight the boys should have as a mentor. Plus, it would seem like a good fit for the good guys faction.

im Panda

Honestly the beginning threw me for a moment. I was expecting to leave off from the little (maybe) date, the tense dream and unfruitful chase was good and Mr FLAME OF YOUTH is very dependable. The chapter felt short but I'm not sure if thats because I blazed through it or it was actually short I can't tell. Either way the chapter was good so I don't really mind


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