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Chapter 12: Comfort and Calm

🕑 Added 2025-02-02 17:03:52 +0000 UTC
Chapter 12: Comfort and Calm

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Lurkybot3k

So many of these go crazy places then end nice and cozy. This has been so fun to read along with.

A D G

It will be, but I don't want to overwhelm the reader with that much of an info dump in one chapter.

Hesrah

There was a lot of backstory shared here. I enjoyed it, but i also felt that a lot of the things that Jake was explaining about his situation felt a bit "abridged" and might need a bit more explaining for the reader's sake.

Marcwolf

I am remined of the movie "Fortress" 1992. When the main character was dreaming of having sex with wife he was woken up by the computer warning of a "Inappropriate Thought Crime". But yes - it does sound like Earth has gone to Shit.. And I still wonder why Max's people still want it.

Marcwolf

Well worth the wait, although I thought they would be doing more interesting exploration. So that is Jakes story. I am really interested to hear Max's story - although he keeps dodging the subject. It is going to be difficult without an AI saying "Dishonesty Detected" or "Sexual Arousal Detected".


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