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Chapter 436: A Broken Path

🕑 Added 2023-07-07 17:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Kevin Catambay

Damn looks like Arthur needs another Relictombs training arc for his Burst Strike

mbaruh

The environment they were in was described in 434 and referred to in 435 so I personally didn't have trouble imagining it in the beginning of the chapter. Also a few paragraphs before she stopped screaming it says "the air full of my sister’s screams."

Wade Dial

She got a bracer from the Spear Beaks treasure horde that allows her to send out these silver shards that can shoot her mana or conjure shields to protect her. They've been called different things by different characters, with Caera referring to them as "orbitals" and Arthur as "drones."

Can someone remind me what caera’s drones are? Don’t remember them from before.

Mattiew

For this chapter, only by the 3rd last paragraph did I have enough details for my imagination to start working. Up till that point I was simply reading words on a screen. Secondly, I know I advocated for shorter more concise sentences; but I was more advocating for trimming out useless/extraneous words. In my experience, adding more words past what's necessary simply increases the workload of the recipient- which also creates confusion. With Ellie 'stopping screaming', I had no real confirmation she was- which in theory is not really an issue- except for the bit I was simply reading words and not imagining anything for almost the entire chapter. I'm not really sure how best to convey these thoughts, so I've held off until I had something I felt I could rely on. I hope that helps.

i mean, she's young, around 15 years old , light yellow core, bonded, beast willed mage, and was chosen by Silverlight, her combat skills and pretty decent, and she's holding herself in the relictombs, which are adjusted to Arthur's level, so , she's definitely doing something

All I could think about was "well no wonder she can handle it she died a bunch of times last time she was in the relictombs lol"

Jesse Gibson

For brief moment-BRIEF- I thought this is where Art would learn some kind of insight where he could “transfer” his ability to heal to Ellie since he had mentioned that he followed the process in his own body but he doesn’t have time to sit and ponder anything in this chapter since he’s so focused on keeping Sylvie’s mess contained. This was a chaotic situation but I really hope Sylvie wakes up soon so that they could gain something from that place, i feel like it would be a waste since it’s a chance to be in a place that is catered to an asura, half asura and djinn and Art… like what crazy things could they gain there? Granted it would have to be only after Sylvie wakes up, they are barely hanging on since Art can’t do shit right now. Anyway, that was crazy! And now…… we wait hahahaha Thanks @TurtleMe for the hard work and chapter! It was a doozy!

Tim

You dont get to be a protags sister WITHOUT plot armor. I think thats like a biblical decree lol.

Tophat Jones

At least she can smell the enemies coming. To be fair to Ellie, she's young, still adjusting to her new abilities, and is being tested in one of the most difficult ways possible.

Calvin Ogle

Ellie is a total trooper. She used her own mana to push her own bone back into place. That had to hurt so bad.

Still can’t see the point or logic of bringing Ellie into a zone adjusted for Arthur. Especially the first time, it didn’t make any sense at all. Seems like she’s wearing some massive plot armor at this point

xroninx

Art has some serious restraints on him this chap and he still manages to vaporize a monster, we have Caera riding Regis like a horse shooting out beams like a dbz character, Chul going full berserk mode and tearing himself out of a giant monster after it ate him and Ellie breaking her arm. Ngl, seems like Ellie is getting the “idk why your here but I gotta write you in” treatment 😂 Still was a good chapter, just wish tht in every fight Ellie is in, she doesn’t nearly die wth some serious injury.

namnas

I like how much harder this zone is because Art can't really physically do anything. Makes things much more realistic because the zone is, obviously, adjusted to him and his even greater power level; raises the stakes and allows other characters to shine, like Chul. And Regis doing something I always hoped he would, sprout wings like the majestic as fuck creature he is.

Chad

Great chapter. Alot going on. Only improvement would have been caera riding arts...back.

Belt

Hope they gonna reach sanctuary soon enough and then proceed to the second level of the Relictombs


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