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Chapter 423: Unexpected Visitor

🕑 Added 2023-03-10 18:00:08 +0000 UTC

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KillBill

This had to be one of the worst chapters

carson

The fakeout with finally getting to see Caera was a real dick twist. Also they may not be useful to Arthur, but someone should really be scavenging all those beast cores and the natural armor from the dead Scourges. If those things are tough enough to scare a Wyvern I be they could make some mean weapons and armor from their hides and horns. Not to mention they must have like SS class beast cores that could really juice up all their ally mages. This story had better not forget its roots just because Aether stuff is happening.

Kevin Catambay

This was criminal bro

Irakli Jishkariani

You know, I stopped reading this chapter in the middle. (I am lance tier, and I am writing weeks after). Thìs is damn annoying and I don't know if author makes it on purpose or not but this was already accumulating and this is too much for me. I hate cliffhangers and I hate authors who regularly use it. Maybe other cases seem like cliffhanger and are not intentional but I had high anticipation all those times. I don't remember all that. Okay forget that, I don't care about past times, but I am really mad that author used ellie's death as cliffhanger. That was definitely intentional and cruel. And in this chapter, there is building anticipation from previous several chapters, starting from seris sending caera, battle, imprisonment, than when arthur comes out and is informed that he is needed for urgent business. "Urgent" business in times of war. Than some distraction comes up and arthur is like, "oh, I'm gonna see aldir right now, instead of taking fifteen minutes about to check what the hell is going on, and bairon can wait on that urgent business". Adding misunderstanding about prisoner on top of that. I am tired of this bullshit.


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