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Chapter 335: Haunting Peace

🕑 Added 2021-05-28 16:17:28 +0000 UTC

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if darrin wants art to be a mentor for a month or smtg then that would be cool

bruh me and like a ton of others were like hmm i bet there gonna be another teacher ark..... me crying in joy after reading chapter

Great read! I totally agree!

you are going to need context for whats to come so, its not filler. A filler would be seeing these new characters here for 3 chapters and then never again with no plot progression.

FeyOne

O.k. for context on my feelings about this chapter - I'm prior military, still in touch with people who currently in the military, and have both served in war-zones and talk regularly with people who have been in more of them than I have. So, with that context, this part of the chapter - "... Being around the likable young ascender—or ex-ascender—had become increasingly uncomfortable for me. Not because I was afraid of him finding out who I was, but because it was becoming increasingly difficult to see him as an enemy...." This part of Grey's development is what I'm loving about this arc. Because this is not just true, it is really important. I have seen it, and I see it everywhere I look in the real world now days. People ready to hate someone else because of: where they are from, what they look like, what language they speak, what god they believe it, who they choose to love, or any of a million other reasons; and it's all trash. I saw it up close and personal over and over again. Countries tell their people lies, the powerful twist information and convince people that "the enemy" isn't like them. The powerful tell people that the "enemy" are evil, they don't deserve any sympathy, they are ALL the same, and they ALL deserve to die; and because people don't know any better, they believe what they are told. But the truth is that we are all the same. Take away the powerful people, lusting after their own advantage and thoughtlessly prepared to destroy anything or anyone that gives them an advantage, and all the rest of us are really the same. We want to help the people we care for, we want to feel like we are cared for ourselves, we want to get up every morning and have some sense that the world make sense and that we have a place in it that matters, (at least to those we care about). Does that mean that, deep down inside, everyone is a good person? No, not at all. It also doesn't mean that all powerful people are bad, or that all of the people who aren't powerful are good. It does mean, though, that EVERYWHERE I've ever been, I've seen good people and bad ones; and I've seen them pretty equally. No country, 'race', colour, culture, religion, or any other way of categorizing people differently has any claim to more "good" or "bad" than any other. I've met just as many horrible religious individuals as I've met bad atheist. I've met just as many wonderful and caring Muslims as I have good Christians. In war, though, it is so easy to lose sight of all of that. It's so easy to fall into just hating the "enemy" because when you are fighting for your life, and the lives of people you care for, it is hard... really hard... to care about the lives of the people you have to defend yourself against. It is HARD to know that the person trying to kill you really believes that they are doing a "good" and "just" thing, and that if it weren't for the war you might even become friends with that person; but because of the war one of you is going to die at the others hands. Knowing those things, and doing what is needed, and still caring about "the enemy" on the other side of it.... that is hard. So I really love this arc of the story. I love it because I am seeing Grey have to start wrestling with these truths. I love that because these truths are exactly the sort of things that EVERYONE needs to wrestly with, and I'm hopeful that Grey's character will not only continue to grow but will come to grips with the realities and truths around these issues. Anyway, I've seen some real push-back from some commenters on Tapas and in other places about, "Why is the author working so hard to try and make us like those horrible people!?!", and that response is EXACTLY why I appreciate what you are doing so much, TurtleMe. That desire people have to avoid the hard truths around these things, and anger and resistance people often use to resist the idea that others are just as human as they are, (even if they are doing "bad" things).... I really appreciate that you are tackling that head on. So thank you. I love everything about this story, and I constantly look forward to new chapters. I just wish there was an easier way for me to navigate sorting out if any of this exist in real 'Print Novel' form, because if it does I'd add it to my library at home in a heartbeat. Great Chapter, and as always, I can't wait for the next one to release. Sorry I can't afford more for my monthly membership.

Demian Buckle

Thank you for the Chapter.

Will T-P

I’m loving it, but I feel like I’m reading filler

Caera is life. Tess is death.

My boy still loyal. Tess for the win. Also I wanna see Art kick Briars ass. Would be very enjoyable.

Polyester Bandit

i want art to put her in her place

Nico Carter

i wanna see art v brair asap

Keaton

That was pretty much what I was thinking, him seeing how Arthur took out all those mercenary’s he will know how powerful he is and probably make a request like that

June Govier

Caera fans rise up

Jacob S

Great chapter as always! While I do enjoy the action, I also like to see the introduction of new characters! I’ll be surprised if Briar doesn’t request a duel with Art to test herself against the seemingly pathetic ascender who had to be bailed out by her master for getting his teammates “killed in a measly prelim.” Although she may not have to make such a request because I’m thinking that may be Darrin’s “one more thing,” - the condition for helping Art at the trial: train my students. He clearly cares for the kids and wants to make the most of their potential. He has not only heard from Alaric of the very basic details of Arthur’s abilities, but saw for himself just how strong Arthur is.

Mandalomaster

Maybe because in a continent like alacrya, there is no many choices to earn some money ! The Vritra made sure that the population cannot do many other things that join the ascenders or join the army. Keep in mind that only blood and highblood names are wealthy, the others are just cannon fodder, and the prestige behind that is just smokescreen.

Carth

Forget Tess; Embrace Caera

I get where you’re coming from. Personally, I love Tess’ character and development. She’s gone from the sniveling snot baby we met in the woods to a stoic, sorrowful warrior. Tess could be her own main character, and I only bag on her because so often in the past she got the side-character treatment. I do prefer Caera to Tess in terms of Grey’s romance, mostly because, as mentioned, Tess keeps falling into plot device and side character roles, and I want to see her shine like she could, but at the end of the day, the romance is a subplot, and regardless of the endgame pairings, I’ll be satisfied by a satisfying conclusion to the adventure.

Rereading this chapter, a thought occurs. How much of an irresponsible, selfish person do you have to be to have had a child and still continue to work as an ascender/ adventurer? Rey and Alice had it right. They worked until they had the money to do something else so they could safely raise their family. Of course, circumstance worked against them, but they tried to be their for their children instead of leaving them wondering every few weeks if this would be the time mom and dad don’t come home. I can understand it in Dicathen a bit more, where adventures are often subjugation quests or exploration quests to secure dungeons and keep people safe, also considering that Adventuring is a hard life and not everybody has options to quit, but in Alacrya? Where ascents are for glory and money primarily? There aren’t any excuses. I mean, if Darrin asks Art to go looking for that kid’s mom in the tombs, I will be mildly irritated.

Ezra

This was good.

I can’t wait till we get 4000 people. I need extra chapters!!!

David Rafael Tamir

Guys I love caera but dont forget that either way she's also someone that needs saving at the end of the day with her situation. Lets not diss tess just cause shes not as strong as a scythe-lvl or able to hold her own against the elites of the opponents country (hell she won a retainer just a short while ago). As much as I love caera, it would be weird if after all this art wont be with tess... and it would just be a tragedy that he will remember all his life if she happens to die, he wont ever move on from that.

I would way rather Arthur end up with caera.

great chapter, longer than the last ones. KEEP IT UP TURTLE. <3

Long Nguyen

Can't wait till he shows Briar how powerful he is!!!

Great as always. Thank you for the great chapter.

Damn ended to quick

Jon Chefitz

Great chapter, I am happy to see Art start thinking about lots of the people left in Dichathen, which he hasnt thought about in a while. Thanks for the great chapter as always Turtle, and I will see everyone again next week!

Jon Chefitz

My thoughts exactly, she is one of my favorite characters I hope she is alright

Nice and long chapter

He is Alaric's "student" sure he will put it something like that ahah

Isaiah

Chapter was longer than most ❤️

Isaiah

They gonna be quiet after this one

so how you ceara x art fans feel after this on

Aya Ryuo

god, this writing is god tier

THIS CLIFFHANGER ENDING BUT THE CHAPTER WAS GOOD

secret, doesn't he release one every friday tho?

Loving this worth it all so goooooood!!

Johnny boy

MOARRRRR! Give me MOAR!. I have questions and i need answers by giving me MOAR!!!!!

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Phenomenal writing as always, keep it up!

This one felt pretty long I loved it

Rocco Mangiaterra

Jasmine was finally mention for the first time in forever! There’s hope yet!

Ryzn

I felt like this chapter was longer than most... either way, thanks!

Special secret chapter? Coooool

I need MOAR!

Jonathan Brice

Thanks for the chapter pog

Meer

finalyyy thx

Johnny boy

Sorry bud

YESSIR LETS GO

Lets goooo

First

Johnny boy

Ah yes perfection!


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