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Chapter 147: Role

🕑 Added 2017-10-15 19:24:12 +0000 UTC

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TurtleMe

I just changed a word since it does seem a bit redundant. Thanks! :)

Mynn

In the very beginning when he speaks of his attempt to dissuade his parents and when he recalls it after the short paragraph ‘As Sylvie’s breathing became slower and more steady, I leaned my head back to the chair, staring up at the flat ceiling of my room as I organized my thoughts.’ They use all but a few of the same words. I was unsure as to whether this was accidental and whether it was something that you would want pointed out. Not a mistake per-say but it stood out to me.

TurtleMe

can you elaborate on this? If there is a mistake, I'd love to fix it as soon as possible

Mynn

Love the update. But I noticed that the paragraph after Sylvie falls asleep is the exact same as one earlier in the chapter when it mentions his parents rejoining the Twin Horns and him having asked them to stay away from the western coast.


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