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Brockton Bay's Marvelous Mage - Chapter Fifty Nine

🕑 Added 2024-11-19 16:37:23 +0000 UTC

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OdinMage

I've been binging this and noticed something... given you're like 50 chapters beyond this now I'm not sure if you'll ever fix it, but I thought I'd mention it. In chapter 55 you have this scene: "Olivia had reacted similarly to Miss Militia when she first saw me walking around with no mask, but while the Protectorate heroine took a bit of convincing and still didn't quite believe me. Olivia took my word for it immediately. After all, she was wearing proof of just how powerful and weird my rituals could get." Then in chapter 59 you have basically the same scene with a bit more reaction: ""I should be sleeping now regardless!" She said, shaking her head. "If I had- Uh… Arcanum… where is your mask?" I chuckled and took a few minutes to explain what I had done to my mask. She accepted it pretty easily, as long as I didn't make her wear something similar. After my explanation, she shrugged and yawned, her back cracking several times as she stretched." I'm not sure if it's ever been pointed out before; it's minor and I likely only noticed it because I read the chapters within a short period, but I wanted to let you know regardless.

Pearl of the Orient

He needs Evocation and Enchantment. Then he needs to focus on a school for a bit.

Elaine

good chappie

Michael Rojas

Yo, can our MC make some golem xenomorphs? That would be cool..

Kyle Pemberton

Sounds like he needs to get enchanting magic unlocked to tier 2 or 3 as well.

SpicyGrapeSoda

If quick casting is viable I think a future charge should be spent on mana efficiency and/or magic penetration. Other than that good chapter! :)

Alex I

Thanks for the chapter!

Noob

Tftc


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