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Brockton Bay's Marvelous Mage - Chapter Twenty Eight

🕑 Added 2024-08-01 15:49:36 +0000 UTC

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Yunru

I know I'm still a bit behind, but point-to-point ritual teleportation (a la D&D Magic Circle) should be specific enough to only need one level?

Fortunis

Wood seems interesting, but is it strong enough as a material to deal with some of the supers he'd have to defend against? Or can he empower and strengthen the materials before hand? Maybe a combination of Wood/Metal to give them added power?

Urbane_Bomber

I wonder if with the rituals he knows, he could create a self driving bike for transport? Or, he can just buy an electric scooter and charge that.

Narasan

A small box that when acivated shoots pepperspray? Pepperspray sold seperately. Just make stationary defences. Something hidden until activated, and too heavy to easily steal.

Narasan

I,just, what? Homedefence 101:locks?Traps? Alarms? A ritual that enchants a lock that is difficult to open for gangers? A floor that can be turned into glue? A small scout golems that looks like a rat, giving advanced warning when they show up in a group? All he needs to do is slow themdown until he is there. Just get an early alarm and slow them down.

Caiban

Oh it is going well ^^ But it could be better, but that is also just my opinion :) Its always down to personal preference ^^

Robolo42

This is pretty much what I would do? I mean he has spent a bit of time talking to and getting to know these people. Wouldn’t you want to protect your friends? Also, he does plenty besides helping, like demanding payment from those who coul… why am I even arguing this. I think this is going well.

Caiban

There is a difference between a good person/hero and a goody two shoes. I dont say he should not help, i say its basiclly all he is. He has no other characteristics. There is just no depth to it.. There is absolutly no one 100% good or bad. A goody two shoes is baseclly the equivalent of a mary/gary sue (a fictional person that can do everything great without training or any other reason), just not for skills more for morales, its kinda boring. I mean the story is good i just wished there was a bit of depth to the mc :)

That Warden

Because he is a good person and a actual hero?

That Warden

I am going to laugh my ass off if the homeless people become druids because of Arc lol

Jan Jakubcik

To be good manifests often as being bad. First usage of wand is to be sold. First usage of being good is being used. Otherwise its boring nonsence fairytale.

Caiban

Why is he so invested and such a goody two shoes? Sure helping here and there is nice but that extreme? Making it your life?

Pearl of the Orient

Hmm. Looks like he's going the treant type golem

Pearl of the Orient

"Mana reaction" do you mean mana reactor or an actual reaction you'd find inside a reactor?

Bishop7053

I definitely would enjoy the poetic justice from using golems against nazis

Robert Meta

Partional is a made-up word I use to describe the rituals of geomancy.

Pearl of the Orient

"from here all the Docks community" from here all the way to the Docks

Pearl of the Orient

"having a partional" partional isn't a word. What are you trying to say? Are you talking about the ritual circle and it's slate platform

Jordan Lopez

It would be nice if he started to form his own hero team to help him bro doesn't really interact with anyone of the worm universe 😔


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