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The Brink and Back - Chapter Twenty Seven

🕑 Added 2024-07-24 15:24:11 +0000 UTC

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Dec

I am a bit disappointed about how this chapter went down. From how the story started and the level of fear and paranoia involved, this seems a little too convenient. So someone was just watching him with all the security and is basically blackmailing him into joining ? Seems a bit naïve on his part

NetWon

Jackson is too naive. Corporate comes in, blackmails him by letting him know she saw some of his stuff, then spouts a cute story? He doesn't even know for sure she was the one they rescued, nevermind about everything else she said.

Gerald Monroe

Corporate suit not willing to sell out for a quick buck? Suspension of disbelief lost. /S

HeavyWood

Love the chapter

Nicholas

So I know Jackson has gotten mostly video game tech, but for the next tech line can we see a movie tech? May be funny to see back to back useless tech lines, the next one being so far advanced that he cant really do anything as well.

Kyle Pemberton

Loved the chapter, would be interesting if his next tech tree had some advanced bioengineering in it.

Artman

And it doesn’t have to be more than a year, he’ll keep getting tech trees and eventually be able to tell the big corporations to pound sand.

Jonathan Rogers

Honestly I think it’s safer to wait around for a couple of weeks and do gigs than do even minor financial plays just because one greedy corpo thinks it will make them powerful.

Fortunis

Yeah this could work. Especially once she gets a glimpse of what he's really capable of. She's also not wrong. Selling an advanced servo here, a new skin weave for Cybernetics there, a bit of new coding or a microchip over there. It'll all add up to real money quickly. Then he just needs a production facility at the base to ship the parts to a second location for storage and delivery inside Night City somewhere and enough security on site to prevent theft and he's gonna be raking in money. This chick can help with all of that. Plus she definitely has the contacts to make it lucrative. Honestly if he dumbed down some of his tech he could probably sell most of it. Drop it down so it's maybe 70% less effective that what he uses himself and market it once the company takes off. Keep the really secret shit for himself like his sapient AI cores. Those are gonna be key to an expansion. Having every facility watched over by legitimately self aware AI who's loyalty is unquestionable takes alot of the potential security issues off the table. Great job.

AlthePal

I was worried with a Corpo coming into the team but this seems like a great setup! Still have to play is safe but the plan seems feasible. Great job as usual mate and thanks for the chapter o7

Nathan R Chase

"It did, Sir," He responded. "She was driving too (fast) to react before she was already too close. Plus, we have standing orders not to fire unless fired upon."

Brandon laxson

Lovin it, you do amazing work with character building

Vyktor

He will always have to be careful she don't get enough power to take over and make him a slave/engineer, but as long as he have his AI friends (and WetBrain friends), he should stay on top... 🤔

Cmols897

This is perfect! exactly what I had in mind when I voted for the new member to be a Corpo

Vyktor

First! (always wanted to do that once 😅)


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