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The Brink and Back - Chapter Thirty Six

🕑 Added 2024-09-25 16:15:16 +0000 UTC

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PeaceMaker03

Awesome chapter! To add to defense in depth, build solar panels around the perimeter of the base. Partly as smoke and mirrors, but then run cable for ground sensors and charging station for passive drones. Hide the drones, think ambush hunters. -Aero drones that can go anti vehicle or drop AP grenades, while feeding data. - Ground drone based off Duke, fast and low to the ground,( maybe a jump pack for tactile surprise),but with a few one -shot anti-vehicle rockets. Mix of EFP and thermobaric, will not require high recoil launcher and be a threat to even corporate raiders. For funssys maybe a pair of needlers or auto shotguns so your good doggies do not need to bite bad guys. Maybe some ECM jamming transmitters around the town to shut down communication of any attacking forces. If it was strong enough it could mess with cybernetics if not hardened enough. Nightmare fuel “rag doll” drones A passive drone that is a cross between a spider, a whip scorpion, and an Aliens facehugger. -Mono-wire antennas, -HK drone babies launch from back like Kaylen’s cat, -tail is a mini bio-grenade launcher with a Nero toxin that attacks emp of the human nervous system. Attempting to cause “cyberpsycho episode”. - All while attempting use its other appendages to enter the targets cyber ports and hack the person into a rag doll forced to attack, blue on blue. Send any “rag dolls” that live back to who ever sent them, and introduce them to a few rag doll drones.

Alnatura

Yeah, murthag is going to offer his dismantling again. The defense was not useless but way weaker than it is supposed to be. The Sensors May have been hacked and, i agree with you, the flying drones should have seen them miles away. I am curious how the defense failed so miserable, i assumed the robots would be way better. Dakota was there too quickly, smells fishy. Even considering that her people prepared for an attack. And what is this solution he is taling about ? Is he making D:bH robots?

Heinz

This is minor, but you could do with a proofreader at some point in the future

AlthePal

Did J actually get the Deus Ex info already? I don’t remember that happening for some reason.. Or is that the next set he will receive? As for the cyberpsychosis, from what I remember from the show and game it comes from mental imbalance, unresolved trauma and the dissonance the user gets from cyberware. I’m not sure how adaptive genes would go with that but it certainly shouldn’t hurt. Also, if a user installs too much cyberware, then wouldn’t that adaptation be mostly useless since the person is replacing their meat (dna) with robotics?

Vyktor

Does the adaptive dna/gene from Adam Jensen would help with Cyberpsychosis? 🤔

AlthePal

Thank you very much mate! xD I will look into the last two you mentioned (Refund and Kathy) I am a big fan of Monk’s ToF and of Fabled Webs in general (they have a ton of great work much like Robert here) so i’ve read PWP as well Thanks again mate :)

ClassicDom

If you haven’t already checked it out, Meta’s story Brockton Bay's Marvelous Mage (Worm) is a fantastic read for fans of the inspired inventor concept. These types of stories can be great but often escalate quickly, lean on self-insert protagonists and the Worm setting. They also usually end up incomplete or roflstomping the in-universe setting via orbital bombardment. Here are a couple of standout fics: Tinker of Fiction (Worm Quest) by Monk Penguin - The original Tinker of Fiction presented in a quest format. It’s incomplete, but definitely a fun ride. Plan? What Plan? (Worm) by Fabled Webs - This ongoing story is well-written with a slower progression. If you enjoy this, I also recommend his other works set in universes like Harry Potter, Pokémon, LoL, and Fate etc. Additionally, here are two enjoyable spin-offs of the original concept, though both are incomplete: I Want a Refund! (Worm) by Unders Kathy's Brockton Bay Adventures (Worm) by Hydralisk Happy reading!

AlthePal

Thanks mate! Would you be willing to share any good tinker fic recommendations?

ClassicDom

Might be mixing it up with other fics, been reading too many tinker/inventor stories. Also good points.

Ikasuki

I don’t understand how they get surprised. I mean flying bots can see extremly far away… get a few thousands feet up and that’s several dozen of miles. In a desert véhicules running at top speed will displace a lot of dust. And considering it is probably not flat terrain they can’t go in a straight line. That’s 1 visible cue 2 lot of time to see it coming and react. I think you underestimate or overestimate speed and time reaction. Like Dakotah arriving in 2 minutes after a call? That’s like she was waiting for it and was only a « street «  away. I mean taking the keys informing the people having all her personnels and body guard arm and ready and getting in the véhicules and driving? Even if she is really close by that’s at least 10 to 15 minutes. Same with the wraith. A plane like a 737 or A320 takes approximately 5 minutes to cover 40 miles… how far do you think a surveillance drone 1, 2 or 3 thousand feet high can see? Depending on the location extremely far away. And I doubt the wraith are driving at close to 300 miles per hour

Fortunis

In the words of the great Joker. "And, here. We. Go."

Feliprins

Can't he just hunt them systematically? When it comes to modern warfare offense is always best, just send an stealth cloacked missile to explode some bases, maybe send some Ops teams like the Corpos, he surely has the ability to do such... Will also get his hand on a lot of stolen tech by doing that I bet.

Mortamir

Awesome chapter

AlthePal

Thanks for the clarification, I wasn’t too sure of TF and XCom tech. Also, when did he get Deus-Ex? Are you mixing it up with Detroit: BH? or have I somehow completely forgotten it? (he’s only got 3 rolls so far right?) Yeah I know about the invisi-drones but they’re still kinda risky (bad wind, sand storms, getting dirty/visible, then getting shot, drawing attention with the invisi-tech). One unlucky day of bad weather and most of your recon ability is wiped or damaged. Also, if someone discovers them, it would be good to have a diversified set of defenses rather than just one kind. Keep people guessing and your assets hidden you know.

ClassicDom

Small drones should totally be doable with Titanfall/X-COM tech. Even Deus Ex tech has nano tech stuff. He already has invisible drones though, just needs print more of those to cover a larger area.

sourwood

Great chapter

AlthePal

I’m wondering is J able to make mini bot designs and drones? Or is he limited to larger things. (I know he has the hacking drone/forgotten mascot and Kayts cat which arnt too big if i’m imagining them right) If he can go tiny, that might help alot with making hard to detect bots that can patrol and scan farther out. Also, I’m glad Riggs made it out ok *(^o^)* Thanks for the chapter mate!

Rem Freeman

Once a week isn't enough, we need this awesomeness at least twice a week!!! Keep up the great work!


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