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The Brink and Back - Chapter Thirty Five

🕑 Added 2024-09-18 16:04:25 +0000 UTC

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PeaceMaker03

Who would suspect that a merc is the brains making all this tech? He is just a disposable asset that is frontman for the brain or brains making all these wonder goodies. Muddy the water a bit, have Sable overhear hints about the brains creating the tech. Make her doubt if Jackson is the man who is the brains, or the face of the brains. Tied into the fact Jackson disappears every couple weeks and when he reappears he has new technology. This would work better if the town had a secret vault underground where he could go work when he is hit with new tech tree.

Ray

i wish some one mod riggs gun into the game

Al

So good

Vyktor

Thanks for the chapter! A fun action scene, salvage and destructive! 😁

Vyktor

Problem (in a way) is that if the story was only "hey choom we did this and that" "Ho cool, I just finished building that", it would became stale and boring really fast. Him wanting be a merc is also good for him because we see him working his strength and techniques to not be only reliant in his tech, to be able to defend himself.

Sammy the Shark

Curious to hear more from Sable. Awesome Chapter, ready for the next one already

Fortunis

Outstanding.

Cmols897

be even funnier if we get one from Wakkako and the other big fixers

Kaine

I hope we get an outside perspective on how these guys jumped from a building and did all that shit. Hopefully from different factions reacting to wtf just happened lmao. Tftc

Cmols897

so going back to Jackson's new car, he could add an AI to it and make it like KITT from Knight RIder. Would add an added layer of protection for when Jackson is just driving around on his own

Cmols897

if there is one thing we can be certain about NC is that it gets its grips on everyone, it just depends on if you have a support structure to keep you out of the deep end

Cole Deucalion

I get that part. And I do like the way Jackie is being portrayed. Kinda seems like mc could just keep creating more bots/droids to keep his choom safe. Like have Jackie, or this crew be a test bed for new gear. Or I'd like a chapter or revelation that shows us that mc is starting to love that life I guess.

Cmols897

It's two fold I think. 1) Jackie stuck his neck out for him when he didn't really need to, and Jackson's knowledge of Jackie from the game (if he has played it I haven't read the beginning in a while) makes him know that Jackie is one of the very few "good ones" in NC and 2) this probably stresses him out less compared to just waiting for them to get back from missions. He probably doesn't "like" being a mercenary but he's doing it to keep his friends safer

Cole Deucalion

I get why Jackie wants to be a merc. Not sure why our mc wants to be one. He seems happier when he's building up his new home and exploring his tinkering options. Cool action sequence though. Don't mean to say that I didn't enjoy the action. Just not sure I understand why our mc is risking his neck when he doesn't seem to love it, and story doesn't seem to have made it necessary.


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