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Brockton Bay's Marvelous Mage - Chapter Ten

🕑 Added 2024-05-23 15:09:07 +0000 UTC

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Fortunis

Ok, well it's clear he needs a new set of powers. Escape and Evasion. With a smidgen of stealth tossed in. I'd go with shadow. Or darkness. Either one should offer both limited teleportation magic and stealth spells.

X Blade

Legit

Robert Meta

So the dates are kinda soft for Dinahs trigger, but she is said to trigger a month or two before Taylor first goes out. So technically this is a little late, but still within the range of possibility. But no, he did not just butterfly away Annette's death, that happens way before

AlthePal

Im curious about the timeline MC is currently in. This accident feels very much like the one Taylor's mom was in, in the OG timeline. But from what we've seen of the city so far and the almost Dinah trigger im guessing that Anne's death was a while back (I cant remember if Coil picked up Dinah soon after her trigger or after a long time). Does anyone remember if any dates were thrown around in the fic?

Eich8noe

He's a blank if I remember correctly, maybe they picked up on that?

Eich8noe

Most cape agencies are fishy at best, the lack of freelance heroes might be suspicious and the power testing thing is... well it'll probably be somewhere out of the public eye, and where powers can be contained or outright negated. That or it's invasive? After two unfriendly trys to recruit him something seems at lest amiss with the PRT.

Ironforge

Well the surprise about his power could mean a few things. One, his story was noticed to be a lie, which if Armaster was on the line would be easy to do and they are wondering what his real abilities are. Second, his story wasn't as good as he thought it was and the quickly realized he is a cape with a growth power with what he gave away. Or lastly someone higher up noticed something odd about the MC and passed on orders from on high.

andrew rousseau

Man BBs capes are really not making very good impressions are they


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