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The Brink and Back - Chapter Seventeen

🕑 Added 2024-05-08 15:39:41 +0000 UTC

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Anthony Maxwell

So he gave her a dehumidifier.

AlthePal

Things are finally picking up with a lot of the set up done, I cant wait to see what comes next! I have to say, the decision to give the ToF a break between new domains is a very very excellent one imo. I can really feel it in these past few chapters. The constant pressure and anxiety to get stuff done before its gone. The break gives a much needed time for things to settle and have a breather and I much prefer the modified version youve presented. Otherwise building from old systems would feel like such a massive waste of time that could be used to secure new tech in the new trees and the cycle would then repeat. Zero time to "waste" building something older, let alone when attempting to merge tech together that might not result in something worthwile. Very well done overall mate! Thanks for sharing your good stuff :D

Nathan R Chase

Do you have a TV tropes page with the list of ships, personal, alliances/goals, and equipment somewhere?

sourwood

I like that it's moving away from Eddies since you won't need them for materials much longer and more into networking and the connections he makes.

That Warden

The song Superbad by Top Dogz started playing in my head at the end when they shook hands and made the deal lol

Zai

Really enjoying this series so far. Great job.


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