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The Brink and Back - Chapter Six

🕑 Added 2024-02-21 16:40:29 +0000 UTC

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luda305

Typo. Scat.

Artman

I like this better than most celestial forge. Stories have a tendency to die when everything becomes trivial.

Wafflebird

Good call on giving a time buffer from one tech tree to the next. It gives Jackson time to plan for other things instead of worrying about min maxing everything and it give the reader some variety instead of info dump on new tech all the time.

Vincent Mason

I think that's a really good way to balance the insane escalation of your average Tinker of Fiction, and one that's relatively simple in execution. I like it quite a bit. This is probably turning into one of my favorite stories from you.

no-thoughts-only-vibes

cruel,but good. lets go out and do stuff!

no-thoughts-only-vibes

Thats good

Israel Perez-Rolo

Oh that is such a tease. I can't even tell if this is a comfort thing, giving a week to settle the tech tree and avoid the pain. Or if it's a consequence of holding off the change in tech trees for a week. Either way neat change rather than the usual (insert description for agonizing pain caused by info overload here). Love your writing and thanks for the chapter.


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