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The Conceptual Deck - Chapter 122 - And time passes.

🕑 Added 2023-02-10 16:16:26 +0000 UTC

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Fortunis

Damn. I was going to read this but the first 7 chapters are missing and it's not on RR. Edit: damnit. This story is good. I wish it hadn't stalled out.

Jamie Celtic

Good chapter like how its a rushed mess like so many authors do when doing the same , like how its open ended in a good place so it can be continued if you want or it can be ended here with nat and carson making a life together and facing what comes in a better position

Niraada

This felt like an overall good holding position, I think. With the Mind Stone being on Asgard and Carson holding the Tesseract, it leaves me thinking about what could happen with Thanos, especially when the EDF is presumably patrolling out around Titan. At the same time, it feels like Carson and Nat are more focused on settling down, and tbh, if they were to completely settle down and have kids, I think that those two would find a much better sense of community on Asgard than with baseline humans-- their life experiences at this point are just too far divorced from those of anyone not in the league of Steve Rogers. On the subject of Asgard, it would be great to see you put out a sidestory or two if you find some inspiration for it. In particular, I think you left a really good opportunity for Frigg to reach out to Carson. She is, for me, probably the most interesting (and simultaneously underrepresented) Asgardian, with a lot of wisdom to offer on a lot of subjects that Carson has struggled with in his own personal growth, and I think she'd make an incredible mentor for him when it comes to preparing himself for having a family, balancing personal power against a need to let others grow, and a very realistic prospect of facing eons, if not eternity. I also wouldn't mind seeing more of Odin's redemption (which it very much was), as I think that he and Frigg are the keys to turning Loki away from the malice and ambition he let himself sink into canonically, bringing him back towards the true spirit of a Trickster God. I think you've done a great job with the story overall, and I've really enjoyed it from start to finish. Would it be possible for you to put up completed Epubs and PDFs of the full story? I end up doing a lot of my reading on my phone these days, and wouldn't mind doing another run through some time soon.

PhotoStorm

nice place to end. looking forward to your next work. 😀 shame though was hoping thanos was going to show up and try and wreak everything.


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