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Quest Academy: Saviours (Chapters 24, 25, 26, 27 and 28)

🕑 Added 2024-03-18 18:48:52 +0000 UTC

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Chris Hoopes

So Im rereading and saw something in chapte 25. It's probably late for comments but fuck it. Sal could have used the flash/bolt ability. He knows it and could run to the far end of the zone while Darren carried Blathaid. This chapter really feels like it's building up other characters and I like that Sal's not showing off. At the same time maybe in the future Sal can switch between the speedster skill and the later Perfect skill while on a Scavenger run. Maybe swapping between skills quickly would be a good training experience.

Kerradeph

In Chapter 28 it looks like you left in a note where it says "*Insert Table for Glock 17*"

Reshi47

But for some reason I also find it kinda interesting if smth developed between Sal and Erica

Davi(d)

Any news on when chapter 29 is coming out? I'm not even talking about a whole batch, I just kinda need that fix lol and even one chapter might do it

Reshi47

I would love that as well !

Mark

These were a fun batch to read, the pick-me-up I didn’t know I needed lol (work amirite) looking forward to the next

Ron Blondeau

Want to see some Sal/ Divinity romance

Robyn Davis

sorry 42

Robyn Davis

Chapter 24 refers to Blathnaid as Ms Clean rather than McClean and Chapter 27 refers to Salvatore having 32 gates opened rather than 43.

James Northman

Great catch. Edited that out on the manuscript side :)

Davi(d)

Great chapters, great to see Sal interacting with his friends a bit more, can't wait for Divinity to finally come back so they can talk as well and for Sal and Blathnaid to use their loot in crafting!

Alteron

I must agree, nice chapters

Oscar Thomsen

I just looked him up. His book: Master of the Hoard looks interesting.

James Northman

Ah, my friend Lars Machmuller is from there. Really fun Danish author. I worked for Zendesk too and got to visit Copenhagen, and really liked it. :)

Rapsten

Loot goblins to the rescue

ShadowOfHavoc

Great set of chapters. In chapter 28 the reminder to add the table is still there and it should probably mentioned that they found the gun when they give Darren the report on what they found, it is a premium piece of loot after all.