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Quest Academy: Saviours (Chapters 2 & 3)

🕑 Added 2024-02-24 16:13:47 +0000 UTC

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Rosario Grasso

Honestly, Volo would be a really great new Hero name for Upgrade. It means "I wish" in Latin and considering the description of Evolve...

Jasmine

little mistake in a sentence in thee first paragraph of ch3: No matter how much curiously Sal had about everything around him, he knew better than to start touching anything.

Charles Gillentine

Really hope we get more book 1 Sal, less book 2 Sal.

Robert Smart

Couldnt he hire one of the rooms attached to the main workshop permanently? Rather than always borrowing it? Itd kill one of the points for favouritism probably at the cost of looking like an entitled rich kid?

Brian J. Nordon

Going to work on it, thank you Andrew :)

gideon ferrier

Thanks for the great work

Andrew Tobin

Damn, I very much disagree with Quest at the end of chapter 2 - he definitely doesn’t need another place to work. Forge and Upgrade and Martin and Gosia are there and need to be there for the students. His friends are going to show up there for classes, and as Sargent Head mentioned, he’s probably very comfortable there. I know he needs to reinvest in his own future and his friends, but I’d like to see him reinvest in the workshop for all students (like the second years who were pissy at him) and maybe in creating a library and resources to encourage support heroes, as part of him forming his guild. But I’d like to see him more involved in the workshop rather than less. He’s not going to get to know his fellow support stars locked away in private.

Andrew Tobin

Thanks for the chapters, Brian. If I could suggest one thing - we’d rather more communication, even if chapters aren’t coming out as quick as you’d hope, than be left in limbo. I have no idea how authors on serials put out so many chapters one at a time - each author is different, but I can only imagine having to have a lot of structure to a story.