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Legendary Class Quest Finale (Poll)
🕑 Added 2021-06-15 15:10:16 +0000 UTCJust want to get a sense of what people thought of the last scenes? Was it a gripping finale, a disappointment? I'd love to get a better sense of what you thought. I'll be working on edits soon enough and going back to fix continuity errors in the story, so I'd like to get an idea of what you all thought.
Next chapter will be in the Real World and dealing with the aftermath and the conversation with Nox. I know some wanted more stats, and others wanted a more climactic interaction with the Celestial, but I'm hoping to address those things in the last chapter.
Thanks for your support!
Comments
ShadeByTheSea
my understanding is this is not the last chapter of book one, so it's good imo. If we had to wait till book 2 for the stats I'd be disappointed.
Not a stats junkie myself, and while thing resolved themselves neatly in the end, would love to have seen a but more interpersonal character development even during the climactic battle. Especially between the non-npc characters as developing them (the other wild cards, jorgen) allows for more interesting interactions outside the game. Also i know the NPCs arent written that differently from other characters and their AI seems advanced and maybe this is just my lack of imagination but have a hard time investing myself in their stories since they are two layers of manufactured or something. I dono. Also great story so far, definitely engaged, and have loved the real world interactions and plots you have going.
