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The Stutter Stare

🕑 Added 2025-08-17 20:13:12 +0000 UTC

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BNevis

It’s a very fair thing to point out. I couldn’t tell you off the top of my head if that line came before or after I decided to not use this as part of the Kallista series, but that could’ve possibly been why. At the same time, something like ‘pasty’ might’ve been slightly better. I think the idea I was going for was more ‘she’s not getting out the house as much these days.’ That said, when I write, I do typically tend to have an idea of what ‘the subject’ doing the growing looks like. And frankly (though I know I didn’t mention hair color), I’ve been on a bit of a ginger thing at the moment, so my personal interpretation of Jamie was a redhead, if I’m being honest. But I’m not precious about people having their own interpretations. More often with what I’ve been trying to do, it’s typically their partner or narrator I’ll leave a bit vague for self-inserts. And that’s a thread that I was trying to keep from the Kallista series (though that insert character is kinda supposed to be a little harder on themselves which the reader might not be). But trying to allow for that sort of reader interpretation is something I can certainly aim for in the future, & it’s totally worth pointing it out. Either way, that aside, I’m really happy you liked it! I really ought do more stories & things featuring enthusiastic gainers because they do make the writing process a lot of fun! And in my head, Jamie’s strip tease was more just her normally getting undressed & the self-insert treating it a bit more like a strip tease, which was maybe why it felt so regular an occurrence? Someone just that genuinely into their partner that even the mundane is enough. Anyway, I always appreciate the thoughtful feedback! I’m happy to take that more into consideration moving forward! Thanks!

Jennifer

An instant classic from you, as usual hitting your good balance of human dialogue, light fun banter, and turn on eroticism (especially describing Jamie’s body’s quakes and snug as a sausage stripping. The bit with her jiggling self brushing the top of the body? *Woof.*). We think we described a character from the Bellflower before like this, but Jamie is especially a hottie from just how *enthusiastic* and happy she is to be obese, lardy, bulbous, voluptuous, etc etc. It honestly makes the fantasy of dating her feel all the more real because, functionally, she’s eager to express and share how into it she is. Makes you want to pop a stick of feast gum in her mouth and watch her eagerly balloon up in fat (like 3 course gum but all courses are fattening buffets, haha) And, the social framing in such a private flirtatious scenario really makes it fun to read. Jamie’s fun! She’s a good hot gal. It adds some character flavor for a mostly straightforward strip and cuddle. Gives off the vibe this isn’t the first time and it’s almost routine, which we imagine you were going for. Here’s a question from you, actually, cause it was an interesting experience for us personally. This morning we found a very pretty and fat black ssbbw model. And when we started reading this, outside of Jamie’s plump figure (for some reason pictured her around 600), we pictured her in a similar fashion. Since we knew you were trying to write vignettes like these to be more vague and… not self insertable, but flexible? We thought it was only natural. But it was a bit funny, it lasted a good bit until Jamie’s belly unfurled and it was described as “pale tummy”. Now, 100% not a critique, just wanna make that clear. Just didn’t know if you were aware of that or ever thought about that? You seemed to maybe care so we thought to bring it up.

BNevis

I’m glad! Was slightly worried since it’s a little different

Ruud272001

Really enjoyed it. Great work 🙌👏


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