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[Picture Series] Treasure Hunt 18

🕑 Added 2015-11-13 14:40:34 +0000 UTC

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Raile21

Daring Do: Ahuizota... The artifact is not moving anymore... Ahuizota: ....... Daring Do: I'm going to grab it now. Don't you want to stop me before I took it? Ahuizota: What's the point? My adventuring life is over now. Daring Do: Come on! It can't be that bad! Ahuizota: In what way is this not bad!?! Not only am I heavily in debt, but I'm going to be a single mother as well!!! Daring Do: I'm sorry.. I- Ahuizota: Don't! Don't say you're sorry!! Don't pity me! I don't need your pity! Not from you!! You should laugh at me Daring Do! You have ruined your archenemy! I am done! The major villain of your story has been defeated like a mongrel. Congratulations! I will not be a bother in your life anymore! Daring Do: Ahuizota... I didn't mean to... This is not what I wanted.. I don't want it to end like this... Ahuizota: After this, I will have to run away from all my debt. I will have to return back to the forest, raise the child and live as an outcast among my own kind for having a half pony baby. Grow old and die hated by my own child. Yeah! That is a happy ending for this villain... *Laughs with tears falling from her eyes* Note: Vavacung use Summon! Raile21 appears! Raile21 use Grammar-Nazi Dynamic-Entry! It's super effective! Lol joking aside, Tocci you can use a notepad to write your revision before copying and paste to the patreon side.

Lorvianne

my pleasure

Vavacung

It's just hard to find any proofreader this day on Patreon for adult section. So now I let anyone help me without caring for their skill...Thank you for proofread, dear.