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Behind When Villain Win 08
🕑 Added 2015-10-16 13:23:24 +0000 UTC "It's show time!♥!...." - Honest ApplejackWarning : Our Applejack is too honest.
Warning : This comic is secret of When Villain Win where it's was continue from this scene => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/ar..
Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be gladly to fix it.
I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for life and another comic too. Hope you understand...
Comments
Raile21
Yeah I agree with you.
Vavacung
People don't usually said very long sentence the whole time, dear. It 's unnatural... You might can find a long sentence in fiction. But this is a comic. Long sentence only appeared when they need to explain something.
Raile21
No revision are needed, but I notice that you have started using short clipped informal responses recently in order to avoid making grammatical mistake. Up to an extent this method does work for dialogs but keep in mind that you still have weakness when writing a story or long sentences which may limit the delivery of your message. Just write what you want instead of worrying about making mistake, its our role to correct them anyway.
J V W
English Corrections: ... None needed, great job! XD
