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[Event] The Adventure Logs Of Young Queen 33

🕑 Added 2015-09-22 15:24:41 +0000 UTC

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Raiku

If she has to travel alone, then why was he here?

Tetrominon

Mental note: pack the filly queen some peaches for her trip.

Karma lightwing

thank you :)

Industrious_Change

Bring peach to changeling? I love that little slip

Nocara

This changelings have everything! XD I like the soldier here

Nocara

Let me help you :) You are Braeburn. You tell to the young queen that you trust her, but you don't trust the changeling drone. So you ask her if you can talk with the drone in private before you let him go. Young queen accepts your decision. So you tell the queen to go rest for tomorrow work in the morning and let her go back to sleep. You drag the captured changeling out of the guest bedroom into your living room and start to question him about his reason to follow the young queen. He tells you that he just wanted to make sure that the young queen is safe. That makes you question why the changelings let the child travel alone. He tells you that the young queen have a destiny to fulfill. Changelings' seer foretold that the hybrid queen will bring peace to the changelings, but she must travel alone.

Karma lightwing

You are Braeburn. You tell young queen that you trust her. but you don't trust the changeling drone. So you ask her if you can talk with the drone in private before you let him go. Young queen accepts your decision. So you tell the queen to rest for work tomorrow morning and let her go back to sleep. You drag the captured changeling out of the guest bedroom into your living room and start to question about his reason to follow the young queen. He tell you that he just wanted to make sure that young queen is still safe. That make you question why the Changelings let the child travel alone. He tell you that young queen have a destiny to fulfill. Changelings seer foretold that the hybrid queen will bring peace to Changelings. But she must travel alone. I did struggle with some sentences, but I thiiiiiiiiiiiiink this is more gramatically correct than the original version, I expect someone to come up with a better fix sooner or later as I know that I aint the best in doing this :) I am just waiting for someone to stamp in with a better fix.

Cylestea

tell him to go home then if she must travel alone and send him off

Philip

Sounds like the youngling's got a pretty heavy load on her back. Ask the Changeling if Young Queen's mother knows about her trip and approves of it. Independence is one thing, but sneaking out against your parent's wishes is quite another, and she needs to know that's not right.

Raile21

lol, bring peach to changeling. I think you mean peace, but with changeling I would never know. Maybe a giant peach like that old disney movie "James and the giant peach"

UxieKnight

Ask if there was any more that we said about her journey

Julius Costa Peters

you say that her journey ahead will be more and more dangerous for her travel alone she will need some that she trust and someling that she can have a talk were don´t have civilization because being alone in this type of situation only the strong willed survive without going insane

RatedPonystar

He asks who is the father and when he learns he also remembers that this father is also the brother of Princess Twilight Sparkle in Ponyville where his cousin AJ Lives