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[Alternate] The Advanture Logs Of Naughty Young Queen 25X

🕑 Added 2015-09-14 19:25:15 +0000 UTC

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Nocara

at your service ^^

Raile21

Yeah that would have been more appropriate, thanks for pointing that out.

Nocara

Nice work. I just want to suggest to change the tense of: "I would have been bigger" to " I will be bigger"

Vavacung

I will choose mature strict rate and post just the cover and make a link to download it in description.

Raile21

It's fine, if its an emergency I am willing to do the revision once in a while. Now that the picture series and the crazy alternate future have ended. How will you post it in DA for the mature rated work? I think you mentioned that for comics will be posted in DA eventually.

Vavacung

I'm sorry to made you do something uncomfortable, dear. It's just that...I have nobody to help me with this and I wait for proofreader for one day and one night now. You are only one who can help me...

Raile21

The revision I can do it no issue, it takes a while only. The only issue is revising something with foalcon in it does makes me uncomfortable.

Raile21

Braeburn: "Oh... This feels nice.. My little lover... Little Strongheart: I wish I can finally take in your whole cock inside of me, but it is too big... Braeburn: I..I'm sorry if you don't like it. If you prefer a smaller one I'm sorry that it makes you uncomfortable. Little Strongheart: N..No, its not that.. I just.. I just want to be better than what I can only do now. I have heard from some of my pony friends that their lover like it if the mare can take in a stallion's whole cock inside. Braeburn: It's ok little one.. I am fine with the way you are, your petite mouth and body. I like you, all of you... Little Strongheart: You like my petite size.. What if.. What if I get bigger someday? Bigger than you... Braeburn: What do you mean? Little Strongheart: I'm petite because I'm still young, but when I grow up I would have been bigger.. Bigger than you and nearly the same size as my father. It's in my blood.. Bison blood. Will you still love me when I'm grown up? Braeburn: I would still love you little one. Since race doesn't matter for us to love each other. Size shouldn't matter as well. Would you still like my cock? It might become too small for you when you're fully grown. I fear that I can no longer satisfy you anymore... Little Strongheart: Do not worry about that Braeburn, your cock would still be bigger than any male bison in my tribe then. Braeburn: Really!?! Little Strongheart: Yes, really big, thick and long...Our tribe's male cock might be long, but they are really thin and well... They will cum as soon as they penetrate once too.. Braeburn: O... Oh my... I don't know what to think if your tribe's male would cum with just a second of penetration.. What about the tribe's female? Little Strongheart: Well.. We are the same *Smile widely* Braeburn: B.. But it takes a lot of thrust before I finally cum!! Does that mean... Little Strongheart: Hehe.. You make me orgasm a lot, my big apple. Braeburn: *Blushing hard*