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[Picture Series] ...Between Lust And Love 13
🕑 Added 2015-09-04 12:59:49 +0000 UTCChangeling B : Wait for meeeee!!!! *Calling for Royal Guard who just crossed the border of the Badlands*
Royal Guard : What do you want?! To take back the deal!? Geezzz!!! I should have known that Changelings can't be trusted!
Changeling B : Wait! Please listen to me before you judge me!
Royal Guard : So, what do you want? *He pauses for a moment* Changeling?
Changeling B : M...May I come with you?
Royal Guard : Why? *Lowers his guard and looks confused at the little Changeling in front of him*
Changeling B : For the first time in forever, there has been only one pony who could have sex with Changelings in their real form ... And that pony is you.
Royal Guard : Me? How can I be the first one?
Changeling B : Didn't you see how scary we are? Nopony ever give us a chance after they realize that the pony they fell in love and slept with is in fact a Changeling in disguise.
Royal Guard : What I did in that cell was just lust, not love. I just did it to pay for my freedom.
Changeling B : Could it change into love? In the cell I could feel it. You cared for me...You really cared for me when you had sex with me and you leaked some love to me...I can feel some love here...for me... *She touches her chest and close her eyes, still remembering the warmth of love that was given to her and only her*
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I got inspiration of this picture series from one clop fiction name "Caught between lust and love" that was wrote by CreepyPony. You can found it here => [ https://www.fimfiction.net/story/.. or in Comic book Saddle Up 2: Creature Comforts [ http://saddleup.braeburned.com ]
I don't intend to copy his idea or anything. But after I read it. I just thought...What if those Changeling in that fiction are females? (That fiction is M/M/M clop fiction) And what if in this story have not just lust. But love(Romance) too?
Beware broken English. This pictures series have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.
![[Picture Series] ...Between Lust And Love 13](https://img5.runfaps.com/storage/7/kk/nx/e9630c-019e7eca-bfe5-780e-8d6d-2a34f1509047.png)
Comments
Kankri Vantas
Thanks a lot, your so kind
Nocara
At your service ^^
Kankri Vantas
Thanks for the help, I don't write as much
Nocara
I has been told that "can" is for express capacity. "may" for ask permission. "can" is very informal to ask permission. ^^; but again I am not native, so this is just a polite guess :)
Kankri Vantas
Nice I did think the C-can I come with you was a little weird,
Nocara
Aww so sweet. This time I got the correction made by chica and added some details, I hope you dont mind ^^ <<< Correction based in Chica's one Changeling B : Wait for meeeee!!!! *Calling for Royal Guard who just crossed the border of the Badlands* Royal Guard : What do you want?! To take back the deal!? Geezzz!!! I should have known that Changelings can't be trusted! .... ...... Royal Guard : So, what do you want? *He pauses for a moment* Changeling? Changeling B : M...May I come with you? Royal Guard : Why? *Lowers his guard and looks confused at the little Changeling in front of him* Changeling B : For the first time in forever, there has been only one pony who could have sex with Changelings in their real form ... And that pony is you. Royal Guard : Me? How can I be the first one? Changeling B : Didn't you see how scary we [were|are]? Nopony ever give us a chance after they realize that the pony they fell in love and slept with is in fact a Changeling in disguise. Royal Guard : What I did in that cell was just lust, not love. I just did it to pay for my freedom. Changeling B : Could it {change it into| become} love? In the cell I could feel it. You cared for me...You really cared for me when you had sex with me and you leaked some love to me...I can feel some love here...for me... *She touches her chest and close her eyes, still remembering the warmth of love that was given to her and only her*
Kankri Vantas
Changeling B : Could it change into love? In the cell I could feel it. You cared for me...You really cared for me when you had sex with me and you leak some love to me...I can feel some love here...for me... *She touches her chest and close her eyes as she remembers the warmth of love that was given for her and only her* So sorry, this part was my fault
Kankri Vantas
*very And no worries my queen, just keep being awesome
Vavacung
Fixed. Thank you vaery much dear. I kinda have low skill on writing action description.
Kankri Vantas
Changeling B : Wait for meeeee!!!! *Calling for Royal Guard who just cross the border of Badlands* Royal Guard : What do you want! To take back the deal!? Geezzz!!! I should have known that Changelings can't be trust! *Turns around and prepares to fight* Changeling B : Wait! Please listen to me before you judge me! Royal Guard : So, what do you want, *He pauses for a moment* Changeling? Changeling B : C...Can I come with you? Royal Guard : Why? *Lowers his guard and looks at little Changeling in front of him with confusion* Changeling B : For the first time in forever. There has been only one pony who could have sex with Changeling in their real from...And that pony is you. Royal Guard : Me? How am I the first? Changeling B : Didn't you see how scary we were? Nopony ever give us a chance. When they know the pony they fall in love and sleep with is really a Changeling in disguise. Royal Guard : What I did in that cell is lust. It's not love. I just did it to pay for my freedom. Changeling B : Could it change it into love? In the cell I could feel it. You cared for me...You really cared for me when you had sex with me and you leak some love to me...I can feel some love here...for me... *She touching her chest and close her eye. Still remember the warmth of love that was given for her and only her* This is just what I thought was right,
