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Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-17
🕑 Added 2015-08-04 12:19:57 +0000 UTC"Of all mares I know. You are the only one who I think I might get chance to get laid with. As long as I have pussy for you"
Warning : This comic is alternate sequel of Crazy Future where Crazy Future is clopcomic. Normal Crazy Future can be found here => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51002140/Crazy-Future
Character Data : http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51508160/Crazy-Future-Character-Card
Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.
I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for university and another comic too. Hope you understand...
Comments
Raile21
3rd sentence need to change from generosity to generous if you want to follow the original.
Raile21
Comment: I don't know about this. If I translate it word for word, it made Dawn sounds pathetic. I'll try to analyze what you want to mean and made it at least sounds romantic. Below is what I come up with while following the original dialog somewhat. 1st Panel: "Why did you pick me to be your first out of all the mares you know?" "Because you are the only mare that might give me a chance." "Because I need to see how great are your generosity. The mare who never refuses when a pony asked her help." "And because I know how much you love to lick a pussy."
Nocara
XD Nice translation! The pussy eater factor is important hmm I man not sure about this one, so lets see if some native can correct it too :P : -Of all the mares you know, why did you choose me to be your first? -Because of all the mares, you are the one that may give me a chance. - I have seen how generous you are. You who never have refuse a anyone that has asked for your help - And how much you love to like a pussy....
