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Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-21

🕑 Added 2015-08-16 15:04:36 +0000 UTC
Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-21

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Robert Prime

yes i guess ether would work

Raile21

Send your link to my Deviant Art Account, either through notes or the actual story through stash. My ID is the same.

Nocara

Agree, but maybe To get fucked by me is also correct, isnt it?

Robert Prime

oh yea hey since you said you would help me with my story can i get your E-mail so i can send it to you when im done?

Robert Prime

HA well blast i comment then your pops up

Robert Prime

ok the only thing i see wrong here is panel 4 Isn't this what you want!? To be {fucked} by me!!!

Raile21

Revise one word in the last panel, the word fuck to past tense "fucked". That is the only revision, the rest are fine.


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