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Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-20
🕑 Added 2015-08-13 13:26:20 +0000 UTC "I just want to have benefits time with my friends. I don't mind what kind of genital I will use"Warning : This comic is alternate sequel of Crazy Future where Crazy Future is clopcomic. Normal Crazy Future can be found here => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51002140/Crazy-Future
Character Data : http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51508160/Crazy-Future-Character-Card
Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.
I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for life and another comic too. Hope you understand...
Comments
Nocara
He is his mother sons XD
Raile21
I'll give it a try, please give enough spacing to make it easier to proof-read.
Robert Prime
would you like to help me edit my story. when i get it done of course. If there's one thing i stink at its editing i don't have the best of eye sight so its hard to see every little mistake and I don't have anyone to look at it as well so yea bad luck for me.
Robert Prime
things are heating up here can't wait for the next one
Raile21
My pleasure, don't worry about grammar-nazi criticizing your dialog after I go through it.
Vavacung
Fixed. Thank you very much. Sorry to bother you everytime, dear.
Raile21
"Ahhh... Why did you gave up your cock if it feels this good to use it?!" "What is the point of having it, if I can't do it with you?" "It's your fault for being too submissive! You don't know anything about courting a mare or inviting them to bed!" "Wait! Really? Do you really have to take notes while we're fucking!?!" "I may have ulterior motive for starting this research! But my true motivation still stands! To help same-sex couples!"
