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Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-12
🕑 Added 2015-07-20 11:44:28 +0000 UTC "You left me alone, again and again..." - Alternate DawnWarning : This comic is alternate sequel of Crazy Future where Crazy Future is clopcomic. Normal Crazy Future can be found here => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51002140/Crazy-Future
Character Data : http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51508160/Crazy-Future-Character-Card
Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.
I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for university and another comic too. Hope you understand...
Comments
Vavacung
Fixed. Thank you >w<
Calpain
Very good on the English, Vava! Just some slight things. Panel 2: You five mares have sleepovers together. Panel 3: Have mare only tea parties. Panel 4: Take baths together at the hot spring.
Raile21
Oh? No revision are needed from what I can see. This already has my stamp of approval.
Nocara
poor guy :( Oh wow, forth panel, they sure have sexual appetite and they are open about it xD Bad for him that all of them are fillyfollers. Hmm quite curious, this is the opposite to most "harem" mangas It's hurt ->it hurts Parry->party Take->taking
