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Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-10

🕑 Added 2015-07-13 11:32:51 +0000 UTC

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Nocara

that explains things XD But he has not any perfect pact yet! :O Oh, my she will be the first

Vavacung

He already did that. That why he and his other friend already have their element. ^^"

Calpain

Looks like most of the fixes are in place, just a couple of touch ups! 2nd panel: "Yeah! I never imagined that I would have the chance to do yours too!" 3rd panel: "So you managed to get all of our friends in bed except me... Is it because I am a stallion?" Looking good!

Nocara

Poor stallion, that is sexist xP Will he have to get into a travel to discover the magic of friendship as his mother did? XD

Vavacung

benefits between mares XD

Vavacung

Fixed. Thank you.

Raile21

Comment: Wow even your porn must have a plot? Well, it looks like its going to be one sexy plot at that, its great! Hmm some revisions are needed, I'll try to stick to the original dialog if I can. Revision: 1st Panel:"All of our friends except me?" 2nd Panel:"Yeah! I never imagined that I will have the chance to do yours too!" 3rd Panel:"So you managed to get all of our friends on bed except me... Is it because I am a stallion?" 4th Panel:"Why? Are you upset? Are you saying you have never went to bed with a mare before?" 5th Panel:"Yes... You are my first..." Note: 3rd panel I have to change the word, there is no try as the act is already done.