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Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-14

🕑 Added 2015-07-26 10:31:10 +0000 UTC

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Kankri Vantas

He must be in love with ace

Kankri Vantas

I feel so bad for him, never getting laid by a girl or his friends who he loves, he loved Ace, but shes a Fillyfooler or bisexual

Raile21

Let's see.. 1st is Sparity, 2nd is Surprise, 3rd is... can be either Eden or LJ, but from the expression I'm leaning towards Eden. Then 4th is supposed to be LJ from the scarf, but in my eyes I see an adult Scootaloo not LJ. My God, Dawn! Stop crying because you're not getting any! You only need to ask Surprise to get in the action!

Calpain

Not bad! Some suggestions: Panel 1: One by one you get our friends into bed with you. Panel 3: But that day will never come. Panel 4: Because I'm a stallion.

Nocara

a quite particular put into scene. A shame he is so bad making new friends, because a stallion surrounded by so many mare should be popular... but of course, he is Twilights son XD Uh! let me offer you my less broken English XD "You GOT our friends..." I think here you should use the past "Wait and hope..." Languages with Latin alphabet use always capital letters after a point. Also, here if you want to say that he was waiting maybe you should put this sentence in past. "But THAT day..." I think those is for plural, for ONE day I think the correct is to say THAT "I am A stallion" Not sure why but this sounds better for me :P