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Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-09
🕑 Added 2015-07-09 11:20:10 +0000 UTC "I'm pussy expert...." - Aerial AceWarning : This comic is alternate sequel of Crazy Future where Crazy Future is clopcomic. Normal Crazy Future can be found here => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51002140/Crazy-Future
Character Data : http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51508160/Crazy-Future-Character-Card
Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.
I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for university and another comic too. Hope you understand...
Comments
Kankri Vantas
Mainly all the girls are fillyfoolers
Robert Prime
My English is ok. but Raile21 and Calpain will do a better job then me so ill just help if i see something they missed which might not happen with their eagle eyes lol.
Nocara
eheheh that explains why she did not wanted the pact
Calpain
Awesome! Keep up the good work. The new sentence should work well with the answer you provided!
Vavacung
I don't know much about English. So I think I will use that.
Calpain
How about something closer to what you have up there then? 'Of course! How many pussies do you think I've licked before?'
Vavacung
Sorry. I can't try that sentence. Cause in my rough transcript. Alternate Dawn will answer her "All of our friend, right?"
Calpain
Some further corrections: 4th panel: Remove the 's' on seems to make it just seem. "Of course! How many pussy do you think I have ever licked before?' Try something like, 'Of course! You think this is the first pussy I've licked before?'
Vavacung
Fixed
Raile21
Comment: The comic is heating up. 1st panel: "Pussy on a stallion. Why does this look so hot...?" 4th Panel: "Ahhh!! Aerial... That feels good... You seems really good at this..." "Of course! How many pussy do you think I have ever licked before?"
