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Crazy Alternate Future Part 01-03
🕑 Added 2015-06-18 10:26:54 +0000 UTC "Equestria have many homosexual pony because the imbalance of male and female ratio. But they still suffer because they can't have their own foal. That why I research about this. To help them have their own foal" - Alternate DawnWarning : This comic is alternate sequel of Crazy Future where Crazy Future is clopcomic. Normal Crazy Future can be found here => http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51002140/Crazy-Future
Character Data : http://vavacung.deviantart.com/gallery/51508160/Crazy-Future-Character-Card
Beware broken English. This comic have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.
I will update this comic 2-3 page per week. Since I want to balance my time for university and another comic too. Hope you understand...
Comments
Vavacung
4th panel I will use your dialog. But we don't have computer yet. So it's magical simulation.
Raile21
Sure 1st Panel: "What are you researching this time! Some kind of a pervert thing?!" 2nd Panel: no revision needed 3rd Panel: "Do you know how many same-sex lover who suffer because they can't have their own foal here? If this research can succeeded, it will help them!" What about 4th panel?
Vavacung
Please don't change the meaning of conversation in 1st, 2nd and 3rd panel. That isn't what I really mean...Can you just fix it grammar for me?
Raile21
Comment: My God this is really happening. Some suggestion on dialog revision 1st Panel: "Why would anypony bother researching this?! Are you some kind of pervert?!" 2nd Panel: "Its elementary my dear, I have created a gender-bender potion." 3rd Panel: "Do you know how many heart-broken couples are out there, wishing to have foals but do not have the right tool? My research would help thousands of ponies!" 4th Panel: "After so many hours of research and computer simulations comes the most critical stage. Field test! Come for me Ace! For Science!"
