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OCT UPDATE 2/2 KOISHI PROJECT/ IWBTWR

🕑 Added 2024-10-31 09:01:39 +0000 UTC
OCT UPDATE 2/2 KOISHI PROJECT/ IWBTWR
OCT UPDATE 2/2 KOISHI PROJECT/ IWBTWR
OCT UPDATE 2/2 KOISHI PROJECT/ IWBTWR

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Luna

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sethdotcomic

Part of what makes Jenny so interesting is that the childhood version of her that we see in the comic isn't the real childhood Jenny but instead a self interpretation through the lense of a Jenny who is beat up and worn down. Maybe why Dyslexitard ended on such a devastating note is because it's chronologically the earliest example of the go-lucky Jenny the ghost/imaginary version is based on getting worn down in this way. I can understand your worry though. Follow ups are hard, and Dyslexitard was a gamble to begin with. But the gamble paid off, because people connected with the message. As long as the twist doesn't betray or undercut the grounded nature of the first part's message, I think you'll be fine. Or you can go full blown crazy with the twist and reveal that childhood Jenny killed the other manager twin!!! :O Prison arc??? But being serious again, nice work on the Kioshi Project. The improved background has a greater sense of depth which I think benefits the scene a lot. I know you have lots of ideas for stuff to do after it's done, but I know it means a lot to you so don't kill yourself to finish it.


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