About Chapter 26
🕑 Added 2024-10-02 12:26:32 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
Following yesterday's release of version 0.11 and Act IX, I got a lot of feedback concerning Chapter 26.
Most of you seem to have reservations about the place of Nathan in this chapter. Most notably, the way he seems to be set-up as a "second boyfriend". While I want to give Nathan a special place in the story, my goal is not to have him act as another boyfriend to Laura.
On top of that, the "reclaiming" part of it puts him as another "cuck", which is not really I was aiming for either.
Well, I've heard you loud and clear! Version 0.12 will include a partial rewrite of Chapter 26, to avoid those issues. He will still be set-up to fuck Laura after another bull has, but not in the same way.
I hope this change will make this chapter more faithful to the way I want Nathan to be shown.
Thanks to you all for your valuable feedback. It helps me steer the story in a way most of you will enjoy. I hope these changes will please you. š
Comments
Zorg
I think the solution to this is to give Nathan less of a spotlight in general. That wouldn't necessarily mean that you have to constantly add new named characters, but more random men that Laura decides to fuck would be nice and shift away from the idea that Nathan is the focus here. If any one man besides MC should be a focus, it should probably be like a childhood friend/best friend of MC or something. A story revolved around that could be fun.
inaire
the dates she has with him are boyfriend activities
Enrico
I like the direction you are going, no complaints here. NTR/S fans are so diverse in particulars so its hard to make everyone happy. Make sure you don't lose sight of your own passion for the project. I've seen developers give up on projects over this. Do what you think is best! Great work! :D
ZER0
I personally liked it and I wouldn't mind if Nathan did stay as a 2nd boyfriend, I think there is something weirdly wholesome and erotic about it. But if you think your straying from your own vision then absolutely do what you need to do. On a personal note, this has been my favourite act to date!
George Costanza
Yeeeah for when the story eventually concludes, if it concludes with Laura having a second boyfriend, I'm always going to assume her and Protag won't last
Max Dewey
I agree. Great decision to rewrite his role. Also...when are we going to see some raw sex and possible cleanup? :)
Modsognir
Fascinating landscape in the background of this photo btw.
Neelis
Thanks for the update on the feedback regarding the recent update. Iām on the fence on how I feel about it myself. On one hand the interaction was pretty hot but on another it felt weird with how āinvolvedā Nathan was. I figured introducing a character like Oliver into the story would be divisive but I think that goes more to show your skills as a writer and making an immersive story and characters. Iām planning to keep two different dominate saves to see the different content: one where Oliver is involved and another where he isnāt. Keep up the great work, Stag!
Saemrath
Good to hear you listening to people. Still hope Oliver get to shine, I enjoyed is dominant personality in contrast to Nathan. It allow for more diversity. Would love if the bull shared pictures of Laura on their own during encounters to spice up the event. Oliver sharing pics of Laura enjoying herself and Nathan Photoshop of previous pictures. The ones in earlier chapters were nice.
Hans Graf
The only dev I know that listens to his community and is communicating a lot
ha haha
I didn't have issues either, tho I did get the same feeling (like he is another cuck. To me it felt like the player is still the number 1 boyfriend tho). I can't wait for FFM threesomes anyomre tho! I'd love to see it soon! :3
Boenz
Those are good news! Thanks for listening to the fans of the game. I'm excited for new chapters and I think I would like to replay the chapter.
My Love Is Your Love
Thank you for paying attention to feedback and being willing to rework Chapter 26 ! Looking forward to it and to the future of this great game !
Le Stag
You won't have to replay Chapter 26, but since future chapters will be written based on the rewrite, it may be more coherent if you did.
Nemo88
Thank you for the advice. For the data do we need to redo the chapter to follow the rewrite or it is already comprehensive in the update?
seekkale
I had no issues with the chapter, but a solution could be having threesomes with the two bulls, shown to the MC. But youāre probably working up to that for future updates
Csampion
Thank you for listening