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Special Extra: The lost Chapters 11&12!
🕑 Added 2019-08-25 17:33:59 +0000 UTCHere´s a special something for you guys!
When starting to work on book 2 I planned a whole substory which I decided to cut completely after finishing two chapters of it. It was a tough decision but I realized I went too apart from my core ideas. I learned that sometimes it´s more important to dismiss ideas you fell in love with than coming up with ideas at all.
Well, apart from this that makes a worthy extra at least! Hope you enjoy and thank you so much for your support!
Comments
FurFist
Read the chapters and liked them. It's kind of sad that you had to cut them. The chapters gave good foreshadowing in Peki and Adelgund's relationship and backstory as well as Nyarai and Peki's betrayal. I was glad to see Muko prove her worth by earning the match through beating Adelgund in an eating contest and defeating Peki's honor. I also liked Nyarai's beach picture with the watermelon, soda, and swimming toy. Her swimsuit and flower compliment her well. There were many funny scenes and even a surprise apparition of the mad scientist in chapter 2. These two were great chapters, even if they became sidestories.
Darkmessiah
So I take it Muko won? Also I wish we could have seen her with the strippers (I wonder if they would have done something "special" for her if she won)
