EmmaBrave
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Avatar 18+ Unfinished script
🕑 Added 2022-08-27 06:00:00 +0000 UTCWhen i make my comics I start with a super loose outline of a script. Much of the dialogue during this pass is a placeholder, and once i arrive to that page i frequently rewrite to improve the flow. The version of the script you’re reading has been annotated to add clarity
(Characters, K - Katara, So - Sokka, Z - Zuko, Az - Azula, Ty - Ty Lee, T - Toph, A - Aang, M - Mai)
*Katara and Azula sex scene*
K: Dont leave, I promise I’ll be back. And when I do I will have taken care of everything, you just need to trust me
K: They’re going to forgive you
*katara leaves azula in the beach house*
Scene 6 - Beach evening
*Katara racing to her destination, Sokka’s award ceremony, everyone is there*
So: And there we were, surrounded by angry spirits on all sides. It all seemed over for us until I realized the badgermoles were freed from their cages…
K: Zuko! I need you to come with me!! Mai and Ty Lee too,
Z: Now? The governor is ready to start
Mayor’s Wife: We’re about to award the medal of champions
K: I’ll explain on the way but first I need a promise from all of you to not lose your cool
So: Katara none of this is making any sense
K: Ughh, just get moving and I’ll - I’ll
*katara spots a hooded figure navigating away in the crowd, it is Azula*
K: Motherfucker!
*katara chases azula down, blowing her cover. Azula reveals herself by thowing fire back*
Az: Stay back!
Z: Azula
Gov: She’s supposed to be in prison! Sokka, I need your assistance
* The crowd is in a panic*
K: No!!
So: Suki, grab my cape! This is a job for TEAM AVATAR
Ty: Wait, sokka. Idk if i can actually fight azula, is that ok?
So: Thats ok Ty Lee you sit this one out, Suki, Toph, let’s go!
T: Finally some action
*Team Avatar rushes towards Azula in an epic fashion, katara blocks them with a shield of ice while Azula runs away*
Z: What are you doing! She’s getting away!
K: I’m not going to let you hurt her
So: Sorry sis, its the governor’s orders
*sokka runs past katara*
*big fight scene, azula v everyone rushing her, katara trying to stop/slow them down, she freezes sokka, suki, mai, toph?*
*aang flies down, real angry*
Z: Why are you helping her??
K: She’s not a threat you just have to let her go (to zuko)
A: So NOW we’re letting things go
*katara aang fight for real, super cool water effects. They are yelling at each other while bending everything they have*
K: Why is it so hard to admit you were wrong!
A: I know I was wrong, when did I ever say otherwise!
K: it would be nice to hear you say it!
A: *Reluctantly* Katara Im sorry! Ive always been sorry, thats why I had to leave for so long I was so ashamed.
K: Thats not the first time you’ve disappeared when things got tough
A: I know i do that alot, dont rub it in!! And it doesnt justify you bloodbending me either
K: I know i know, that was me being stupid. Revenge is stupid.
K: But thanks … you have someone else you need to forgive to
A: I do? *aang looks towards everyone else fighting with azula* Do i haaaaaave to
*katara glaring*
A: Fine, but im doing it for you
*they kiss, aang flies off*
*azula and zuko are fighting, aang comes out of the sky to break it up with airbending*
A: STOOOOPP!!
*the fighting stops*
A: You arent going to hurt us Azula, are you
Z: ‘Not going to hurt us??’ She just threw a fireball at my head!
Az: Only because she threw a wall at me! *directed at toph*
A: Enough! Azula, you cant keep running. Not from everyone you know
*Ty lee breaks the tension by embracing her friend*
Ty: Azula! I never thought i’d see you again!
M: Hey azula (nonchalantly)
Az: Hey Mai
K: Azula doesnt have anywhere to go, and what she needs right now is a family. One that wont attack her, or get revenge. The cycle of fucking each other up ends here
So: Alright team avatar, let down your weapons.
Mayor: WHAT, you arent going to arrest this maniac? She needs to be brought to justice!
So: If its all the same to you, I think she is going to be staying with us for a while
Mayor: In that case, you have betrayed your solemn oath to protect the people of Ember Island and will NOT be awarded the medal of champions. Come dear
Mayor’s Wife: Goodbye, Sokka
So: (To Zuko) This would be a really bad time to tell him I fucked his wife, huh
Scene 7 - Beach house night
*Everyone is fucking each other in the beach house, Aang and Katara are not there*
(Come up with some hot/funny material)
*Aang and Katara on the balcony*
K: Hey
A: So does this mean everything is all back to normal?
K: As ‘normal’ as they can be, we werent all quite this horny back in the day, right?
A: I think time apart might explain it
K: Right, what has it been, 3 years?
A: Feels like 100
K: I missed you
*fuck around a little until Katara stops*
K: So, you know … theres no reason why this ‘thing’ needs to be exclusive. If you wanted to sleep around or
A: Or you want to sleep around?
K: I like to keep my options open
A: We can make that work
*Pull out to the gaang, all mingling and fucking around*
Comments
Bamitstheman
My guy this is the last thing she’s gonna post before she deletes her patreon
LAZER™ .
CrowMagnon
Thanks for sharing this before you left. Considering how hot emotions run in both the comic as it was left off and in the readers when we didn't have the whole story, it's good to have the full view.
ALW
I'll be honest, the final orgy scene would seem a bit 'much' for me based on previous actions in the comics; that said I am no doubt in the minority, and I do want to wish you the absolute best for the future, and say I have really enjoyed your content!
Adiel S
Thanks for giving us closure. And again, so happy for you about the new job!
StormR7
Thanks for all the hard work. Wishing you the best in your future endeavors, good luck family
DC_Hero
Hope to see you back soon
Tony2Dirty
Oh I definitely would loved to see you draw this out. Wish you the best luck in life.
NoNameC
Thank you for this :) I really appreciate that you shared this with us.
NaughtyHokage
Yes! Definitely want to see drawn out but super happy you reached your goal! Will miss your content! Wish you the best!
LaZzAM90
that was an awesome little script ♥ praying that one day you can come back and finish it, but regardless take care in your future endeavors and thanks for all the incredible lewds! ♥♥
Sad to see you go Emma, looks like this is the end, and what an end.
