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Bad Beat: Chapter 6
🕑 Added 2024-12-04 10:00:13 +0000 UTCI hope you're all looking forward to some quality time between Elaine and Angela!
It is interesting how this whole story has developed. Originally, Nurse Maddock was just a character I created so that I'd have a regular character to use in stories set in a brainwashing facility. Then I introduced the idea of Gabriel Chesterfield having a sister separately from the entire idea of Nurse Maddock. But I just thought it'd be a fun reveal to show that these two distinct characters are actually linked together in an unexpected way.
And now that leads us here. To Elaine Maddock and Angela Chesterfield, and how exactly Angela became Elaine's wife. It's one of my favorite parts of writing, when things end up revealing themselves to the author, and then I get to reveal them to you. I can't wait to show the rest of their story~
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Smokey
Thank you! I always find it challenging to write scenes like those, and I'm glad that I managed to pull it off! I spent so many days figuring out what the pain machine should be exactly, and I think I landed on a solid concept for it.
vasily26
Yesss love whenever you write a time-lapse of torture/brainwashing! Elaine’s pain machine is so intense, I can see how it could turn a dominant like Angela inside out. Can’t wait for more!
