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Hot Tub Love Machine - 20
🕑 Added 2021-06-07 19:16:00 +0000 UTCHi, if you're not up to date on Hot Tub Love Machine, read the previous chapters here.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1GWUWRgDI1Zh7bnb4EJMgnRKvgdafJoRd?usp=sharing
An edit to chapter 19:
In the first draft of 19, Emi's father was a total piece of shit and after discussing his actions with Nick and an offline friend, I've decided to lift the He fucked me before telling me to make Mom's life a living hell. from the text.
Foremost because Lucas isn't able to answer that. The change is now:
“He also told me to follow in Mom’s skank footsteps because showing her a mirror of herself would help me make her life a living hell.”
There are a few other reasons, but I'm happy with this change.
Thank you all for the support!
