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The Stuff of Nightmares - 2 - Beauties and Beasts
🕑 Added 2021-06-01 01:56:11 +0000 UTCHi everybody!
In this installment Wicked Sharp and Doctor Nightmares are on the run with the mind controlled teenage heroine Action Girl, but they won't just stay on the run and so hit up the all girl team of Les Belles to recruit some more mind controlled muscle for their upcoming big caper!
This is a direct sequel, continuing Cut and Run, which I first published five years ago, so if you haven't seen it or want to revisit it, read it here
Cut and Run : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Fte4y_SgvdFzGoFaqvnNZjYDF4DWwFidl3AHkY_wSuQ/edit?usp=sharing
It's also in the same universe as my Flying Fox and Warhound series, but other than a few nods either which way, you don't need to read one to understand the other. I hope.
Flying Fox and Warhound : First and Twenty : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZovnH2hegpzupvqJ-J4ciKgibgZQYWRd3M7bLhi17mo/edit?usp=sharing
Thanks to the vaccine wiping me out for a few days. I didn't get a chance to sleep on this and edit with fresh eyes. I will do so on June 2nd.
I hope you like it! Thank you all for the support!
Comments
Neal Johnstone
I'm gonna get into his limits and his plans to overcome them with parts 3 and 4. Heartwood's not gotten off without lasting consequences. Her loss is being kept quiet while plans unfold. But, if he had abducted a Challenger, he wouldn't be dealing with them one at a time. Heartwood's gonna be coming back soon and we'll get deeper into what's happening on her end. Thanks for the questions!
Nick Cartwright
Does the mind control not last if the girls don’t stay close to Jeff? Also if Heartwood is free why would he care about being loud? He used his powers to sexually dominate her and revealed that he can use mind control. So wouldn’t that make him a priority to the Challengers? Therefore rendering him releasing Heartwood and trying to stay relatively low pro file a moot point?
