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Ring Toss - 18
🕑 Added 2021-04-05 20:01:01 +0000 UTCHi, if you're not up to date on Ring Toss, read the previous chapters here:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1jaJyxh99feCWYyY77VtKuhsLtxzeMWLq?usp=sharing
Alright, in March, I made 7 posts (+Haunted), in April, I've got two Ring Tosses and two Hot Tubs. Plus I plan on posting Eris the Chaotic (11 of Small Town Goddesses) . But I don't want to produce less as time goes on. So I'm aiming for a look back into another story I haven't touched in a while for the middle of the month (trying for Friday the 16th, give or take.) It's going well, and I hope you'll like it.
Thank you all for your support!
Comments
Neal Johnstone
Most of the stories I write are over the course of maybe a couple of weeks, it's hard to force a pregnancy in that time frame. But I am intrigued by the idea. Space Nut takes several months and all the girls are pregnant in that but the births aren't until the epilogue. I'll have to go to the drawing board. It seems like once Harem stories involve a pregnancy, they naturally bend to being focused totally on pregnancy as the backbone of the whole thing. Thanks for the feedback on the timing problems of Ring Toss. I feel like I've been failing Charlotte AND Michelle, but I'm not surprised Michelle's the bigger one for you. I'm looking at 25 chapters for the finish. I think once it's done and I look back, I'll need to drop a bunch to the cutting room floor.
Nick Cartwright
Thumbs up good detailed sex scene. Thumbs down the chapter was nothing but sex without much progression. Thumbs down he still hasn’t had sex with Michelle even after spending the last chapter setting it up. I get that you’re trying to build anticipation for Michelle but you’ve missed the peak. I feel like you’ve waited too long and some of the interest has fizzled out for me. Also this isn’t just for this series but I would like some of the pregnancies in your stories happen in the body of the story and not just in the epilogue. It would be interesting to see how that would factor into one of your works.
