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The Boy Whose Dick Gave Us Superpowers
🕑 Added 2020-07-14 02:34:09 +0000 UTCPotential story #2! Another title I'm definitely not married to. Though I do like Snakes on Plane type titles. This one is a bit of fun, and has sex in chapter one. Most of my stories don't.
Run-on Sentence Time!
Blurb: When Martin FINALLY tells Nola, his manipulative crush, to go fuck herself, she lashes out and takes back power in their relationship with sex, but it's not only relationship power she finds herself with, after literally FLYING home she tells her best friends who immediately try to steal HER superpower giving golden goose from her. This means war.
MFFF, Mind Control, a bit of femdom, a bit of bondage, a bit of threesomes, a little bit of violence (not gore), and all around general supervillainy.
Superpowers will be more of the psionic psychokinetic type, with using her powers more inwardly to replicate Superman/Supergirl type speed and strength feats. I don't want to imply from chapter 1 that Nola basically has every power.
It's mostly a coming of age and confidence for Martin and a coming of age and redemption story for Nola. All along the theme of girls don't fight fair.
Hope you like it!
Comments
Neal Johnstone
I'm playing with Power Fantasy or, more on the nose, Superpower Fantasy/ Super Power Fantasy, haven't decided on composition.
HardhatDoozer
The beta powers
HardhatDoozer
Rival Super Roomates and their Boy Toy of Power
Neal Johnstone
I'm thinking more like two villains, one hero.
"The boy, who made heros"
Neal Johnstone
Thanks! These titles as of yet haven't been my favorite. Super Harem's an OK title but to me suggests a man in charge of women, that Martin's going to have more of a say in how things go than I want him to. I'll come up with a few ideas before the votes begin.
HardhatDoozer
I have to say that for him, neging her turning almost immediately into her taking his virginity is probably better than his imagined best case scenario. I think the name maybe could be shorter. But up to you. “His magic jizz” “The super harem”. Or not. Probably doesn’t matter. “Jealous super roommates”
Neal Johnstone
Thanks! I very much appreciate nitpicks.
Just because I'm sure you appreciate random nitpicks as much as anything, during the sex scene it seems spellcheck cut pillow into pill.
