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Every Woman has a Price - 23 - Retention
🕑 Added 2020-06-17 19:30:57 +0000 UTCHi, hope everyone's healthy and safe!
If you are not up to date on Every Woman Has a Price you can read the previous chapters here:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOx?usp=sharing
A quick update -
On Saturday, I took my advice and slept on Small Town Goddesses 10 - Eris the Chaotic and took a look at the episode with fresh eyes and lots of caffeine. Thank fuck I did. Normally, I write an STG story over a two to three week period, adding something everyday. That helps with continuity. But Eris I wrote over 3 months, with at least four days between bits of attention. There were several discontinuities. I'm currently going through it and making sure it's sensible and that the banter fits the action and predicts it properly. I'll post it after I'm happier with the final product.
Dick Picture Perfect is coming along very well, I think I'll finish it in 2 or 3 chapters. With this chapter I have every piece of the puzzle except for Wendy lined up for its place in the finale. I expect less than ten chapters.
Thank you all for your support.
Comments
Neal Johnstone
Thanks! I'm excited for final result Eris too. Once I untangle the knot it's going to be one of the better chapters. Georgia's a harder narrator to get ahold of because she's supposed to be the most straight forward and competent, but I think it makes her the best storyteller for when things get out of control.
Istmael
Appreciate the update on STG and excited to see how the revised Eris the Chaotic turns out! All three of these stories are really hitting their stride and its great to see everything coming together
