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Every Woman Has A Price - 4 - Loss Prevention
🕑 Added 2019-07-01 20:56:07 +0000 UTCSo, I'm committed. All of the chapters will have business and money themes. I hadn't actually planned that when I had started.
If you are not up to date on Every Woman Has A Price, read the earlier chapters (Or check out the character list) here:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1r9Ugk3EYFL1TurzgulHsycd7PqldTYOx
Thank you all for your support on this cloudy and grey Canada Day!
Comments
Neal Johnstone
Yeah, could get scary, each coin calls for two girls. Twenty four girls. Will, Kirk, Maxim, Carlos the cook, Davy the other kitchen guy, and Liz's boyfriend. I gotta get the plot moving, so Liz should return in 5 (or the first page of 6 at the latest.) The plan is to run the story on three rails Janice (and Tamara), Elizabeth (and the restaurant), and Frieda (and the coins).
HardhatDoozer
So far it is percolating along nicely. It has a potentially scary number of characters though. Jewel is an interesting sounding enemy to be sure. Maybe be Elizabeth returns next chapter?
Neal Johnstone
Excellent, thanks. Price has been a bit of a shock. It opened to a garbage score on SOL but every chapter, every new comment and it all feels like it's building to something great. I like that pressure to know I have to live up to expectations.
Istmael
Awesome chapter, and I love the business theming. Can't wait to see what happens next!
